Friday, January 06, 2006

Times Gone By

I'm back in another time and place,
with a lover's fingers on my body,
and kisses upon my face.
Listening to the radio,
up at the stars we stare,
as very , very ,slowly,
he relieves me of
my underwear.

12 Comments:

Blogger Perfect Virgo said...

No time like the present so I'll strike right back! This lulled me into a sense of false security. Starting softly and sweetly it promises discreet tenderness and then comes the final couplet - reminding me of the persistent reality of romance.

Thanks for visiting the Complex Ms temppixie.

2:29 PM  
Blogger radinski said...

WoW, WoW i am quite speechless this poems is amazing, I love it truly temppixie I am going to keep this one in my memory for sure! Great poem love it.

Peace & Love

2:31 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

gave me a little shiver

11:47 PM  
Blogger floots said...

behave yourself! :)

4:22 AM  
Blogger temppixie said...

P.V....Nothing like a bit of false sense of security!

Z.R....Thanks for the kind words.

Anon...Gave me a shudder!

FL....Where's the fun in that!
ps love the hat!

2:55 PM  
Blogger Russell CJ Duffy said...

well slap my thighs and knock me sideways that lady from devon has gone unecessary.

(bloody good job too!)

1:13 PM  
Blogger Letajo said...

Yes, it is a relief...never thought of it that way. Nice write.

1:37 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hello there!its been quite awhile since my last visit.thanks to floots,i was able to be back here through his blog im gonna link you you to mine ok :)thanks!

5:40 PM  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

It's been a while i last visited your blog, and when i returned..

heheh, what a lovely poem!

12:15 AM  
Blogger ... said...

What a wonderful site you have here. This poem instantly put a smile on my face. Subtle humor. I loved it!

9:08 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

Oh Lord!
i second wat i just said

7:44 AM  
Blogger Known Stranger said...

I'm back in another time and place,
with a lover's fingers on my body,
and kisses upon my face.
Listening to the radio,
up at the stars we stare,
as very , very ,slowly,
he relieves me of
my underwear

to have pain with pleasure.

7:42 PM  

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